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Kelly Xan's avatar

This story is getting better and better with each read. I'm so intrigued by the Architect, and I am deeply invested in the characters. I cannot wait to see how they go about tackling this terrifying dilemma. I'm curious if Liam is going to ever join up with Kael and Elara moving forward. I would hope the Architect judged me as Evergreen, but it is seriously making me side-eye my own green thumb and if it is green enough.

Graeme Brandham's avatar

Liam, you will be pleased to know, will definitely have his moment in the spotlight. So far, he has felt a bit like a side character rather than a main. But that will change.

As for whether people are evergreen or not. I can't speak for the architect, nor would I dare too. But I suspect that peoples intentions weigh more heavily in the final outcome than we are currently led to believe from him. In that sense you should be safe, as it seems you have good intentions.

Kelly Xan's avatar

Alright, that does make me feel better about my standing with the Architect 🤣. I am SO excited to hear that about Liam! I can now happily speculate what he will happen with him while I wait for the next installment.

Rainbow Roxy's avatar

Excellent continuation. The narrative transition from the last dispatch is seamless, immediately establishing a potent new paradigme for these consequences.

Graeme Brandham's avatar

That's really kind! Thank you. I am excited to get the next part done. I had hoped I would get it all finished before Halloween, but I think that might be asking a lot. Hopefully you will find that the next part transitions nicely again.