Magical worldbuilding with that physics detail about gravity manipulation. The way the rabbits "tilted" and fell horizontally is legitimately clever sci-fi embedded in what feels like pure historical whimsy. What hits hardest is that last exchange between father and son at the Manor, the Squire recognizing Brave's worth mirrors the father reclaiming his own dignity. That's the real rescue happening, not just saving a pony form slaughter. The Lumi Protocol bit at the end adds a whole secret-society layer that makes me wanna read everything else in this series.
This is such a lovely comment, thank you so much. It gratifies me immensely to see someone who has gone into such detail with what they enjoyed about my funny little stories. I hope you do get the chance to read more of it. Its part of a wider serial I am developing, set in an alternative earth, and I have been carefully making sure all these Aurora Archive entries support the bigger story. Its been a fun challenge re-writing history to include intelligent rabbits, and then to pull that into a Sci-fi story as well.
Hehe another true story, I had just watched cool runnings for like, the billionth time in my life. I love in any story when a group goes against their usual nature to help another in need. It always brings a lil lump to my throat.
Magical worldbuilding with that physics detail about gravity manipulation. The way the rabbits "tilted" and fell horizontally is legitimately clever sci-fi embedded in what feels like pure historical whimsy. What hits hardest is that last exchange between father and son at the Manor, the Squire recognizing Brave's worth mirrors the father reclaiming his own dignity. That's the real rescue happening, not just saving a pony form slaughter. The Lumi Protocol bit at the end adds a whole secret-society layer that makes me wanna read everything else in this series.
This is such a lovely comment, thank you so much. It gratifies me immensely to see someone who has gone into such detail with what they enjoyed about my funny little stories. I hope you do get the chance to read more of it. Its part of a wider serial I am developing, set in an alternative earth, and I have been carefully making sure all these Aurora Archive entries support the bigger story. Its been a fun challenge re-writing history to include intelligent rabbits, and then to pull that into a Sci-fi story as well.
Hehe another true story, I had just watched cool runnings for like, the billionth time in my life. I love in any story when a group goes against their usual nature to help another in need. It always brings a lil lump to my throat.