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Verdant Butterfly's avatar

I had a mix of emotion, confusion, intrigue, and excitement all wrapped in a short micro fiction. Well done.

Graeme Brandham's avatar

Hehe hopefully any confusion was later cleared up. But I am delighted to hear it hit all these buttons. I am just about to start on day 6's post now, so hopefully I can continue this trend. ^^ Thanks for the lovely comment.

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Aye, my confusion was what was this rabbit...why did it come through the grates and why is that man firing a shot gun in his house?!? Who does that? Children, property damage...oh right finish reading the story .... I did of course but those where my questions 😂

Graeme Brandham's avatar

Haha yeah I had a question mark over the shotgun moment as well. In the end, I decided if someone was crazy enough to live over a burning mine, they might not mind so much. Especially because at that point, their home would have been kinda worthless anyway. But yes, it was a weird choice xD